Clear website

[lgalexanderusa]

I've developed a website for a pharmacy company, but the people i've developed it for says that the page is not the contents are not clear enough. I'm using standard text/image .

Any help would be greatly appreciated

 

[vacunita]

Perhaps a link would help.

Or do you want us to guess why its not clear?

How exactly is it not clear?

Fuzzy text? Or is the web site too crowded?



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[lgalexanderusa]

Thanks for the reply.

Sorry for being so vague.

The website link is:

http://www.rxpapainc.com

 

[vacunita]

Looks fine to me.

You may want to remove the blue borders from your buttons on the left side. you made the images there with rounded corners, and having the blue square corner border kind of defeats the purpose.

But of course that's just an aesthetic change.

So again I ask, how exactly is it not clear?

Perhaps having the Pharmacy company explain to you why the contents aren't clear to them may help you identify the problem.



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[johnwm]

As vacunita says you should go back to your clients and agree a design outline. A few visible points that you might consider, though I guess some are due to the very early stage of development.

1. You may need to take some guidance on colour palette choice - there seems to be no consistent palette in use, with blocks of near-saturated colour and a wide range of hues in use.
2. The text in your graphic links is very small and the images have no alt text.
3. Layout breaks if user zooms to try and read text.
4. You appear to be using 4 different text colours.
5. Small serif font for body text is always harder to read.
6. Title attribute not set.
7. Fixed width page not centred
8. See

http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http://www.rxpapainc.com/

for a technical summary of your page (presently shows 73 errors)
9. There is a HUGE amount of irrelevant text (which should probably be condensed, tidied up and put in a style sheet) before the actual content.

We look forward to seeing the updated version.

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[lgalexanderusa]

Updated and modified website:

http://www.rxpapainc.com

 

[johnwm]

Starting to look better. You still need to look at

http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http://www.rxpapainc.com/

although I see you've got the errors down to 38 now.

It may also be worth considering whether all your visitors run on MS platforms, or can cope with 'Windows Media Player' being foisted on them.

You still have lots of in-line styling, which looks as if it could go in an external stylesheet. It almost looks as if your page has been generated by one of the old-style MS automated webpage generators, or maybe an old version of DW.

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