I received an email with a .pdf attachment, which turned out to be a memo about the companies health care switch. The memo does not have any errors, however, the style seem to be taken from emails rather than business memo writing as it once was done. Example, the writer uses the word today "Do not use the xxxx Medical and Rx card after today". Not wrong but they could have stated the date rather than make me look for it as I did not read the memo until the next day.
Another place where they could have done better, in my opinion, is the line "All other insurance products (dental, vision, life and STD) will not change on July 1st". My first thought was STD is sexually transmitted disease as I do not remember what it is. The second thought was the negative "will not change" could have been "will remain the same".
As you can see by this post, I am no expert. However, this was said to be sent by "Management". I would hope (unrealistically) that "management" were better writers than myself.
Oh well, just trying to get something started in the forum as it has been quite for a while now.
The Lord is my shepherd (Psalm 23) - I need someone to lead me!