My first thought when I hit the page was that this was a medical or similar site.
Just what does a syringe have to do with design? Sure, you have surgery in the name but thats hardly a reason to have a syringe as one of the most prominent parts of the page.
We also provide logo design to small company's that will also help promote their business.
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We also provide logo design to small companies that will help promote their business.
We can provide two different types of Web Site Design which are HTML and Flash. The later making it possible to add animation and sound to a web page.
While this is true about flash HTML can produce the same effects using embedded sound and graphics.
"What is SEO?" you may ask. SEO stands for Search Engine Optimization. This is where your Web Site is set up properly so that the site will receive the visitors it requires.
This is totally out of place as it appears 3 paragraphs after SEO is mentioned. Also, as you are in Scotland, it stands for Search Engine Optimi
sation.
On the contact page, most people are likely wanting to see an address so that they know you are actually a company. Not having any contact details except a form is pretty much going to lose you most potential clients. The only way I know approx where you are is because of the opening statement on the home page.
e.g 100MB of space will allow 000s of standard webpages to sit on the server.
Think you might want to correct that figure.
Not tested this but your formail script looks like its wide open to spammers.
Question: What if we are not happy with the work that you have produced for us?
Answer: No payment will be asked for if you are not completely satisfied with the service.
So, if I tell you that I want a site build one way, then change half way through and continue to do so, you will continue to build to my request or not charge me? This also means that you will not charge me any type of deposit?
On your navigation menu you have flash design listed, why then can't I contact you about this? The form omits this option.
With these technologies we can build and deploy very modern, usable and up to date website.
Errors need corrected. Actually, I just read that whole page and most of it doesn't make any sense. You only have a few pages on this site yet you don't seem to have proof-read any of them??
Flash Web Site Design
Advantages - Disadvantages
When you say
Higher bandwidth &
Slower loading times it doesn't make sense at all. Slower than what? Higher than what? You can't compare a single product, you need to say that this is compared to HTML.
When I see phrases such as:
This would be done using the latest software used by many design professionals.
it looks to me like you are trying to convince yourself that because you use the same software, you are as good as them. The client doesn't need to know the software you will use.
Hope this helps
Wullie
The pessimist complains about the wind. The optimist expects it to change.
The leader adjusts the sails. - John Maxwell
