I have to echo the above comments about your site, it just seems really busy for no reason.
The things that I noticed were:
1)
Welcome visitor, you're currently not signed in, If you're not yet a member,
Please register. If you've forgotten your password, click here.
The above seems like a lot of text for no benefit. What's wrong with something like:
Welcome, please log in or register.
Remember password should be somewhere at the form, not in the above sentence. You could even consider only showing it when they attempt to login and fail.
2) Your search box is absolutely huge, it should be about quarter of the size it is.
3) If I need to login before I can search, why can I see it when I am logged out? Hide the search box until I am logged in and can use it.
4)
To view results from this login, view the top-right handside of this page. Thank you.
This may just be me, but this sentence seems out of place and I don't even fully understand what it means. Again it clutters the page for no apparent reason.
5) On the top login form you have
Keep alive but on the next form you have
Keep me signed in. Pick one and stick with it on all forms, there is no reason to have different text meaning the same thing.
6)
You are currently not signed in. You will have to sign in to view this page.
If you don't have an account with us, it is advised you register. If you have forgotten your password then click here to have it emailed to you. You can login by filling in the form to the top right side of this page.
This again seems like a huge paragraph for no reason. What is wrong with something like:
You must sign in above to view this page. If you don't have an account with us, please register below.
7)
Returned 0 results of keyword: aaaa. from Shops
Showing Page 1 of 0
No Adverts to show. To Place an Ad, click Place Ad
Showing Page 1 of 0
The
Showing Page 1 of 0 doesn't need to be shown if there are no results.
8) The side navigation doesn't need to be shown on the home page, I can't do anything with it if I am logged out so why show me the options?
9)
Veepiz helps you share and connect with people in your life. Make a great profile that is all about you, find your friends, meet new friends, chat, flirt, find jobs, sell or buy stuff, advertise your business or talents, share photos, participate in educative forums and a lot more.
Firstly, copying any text word for word from a massive site like Facebook is never a good idea, even if it is just a single sentence. You have gone a step worse though by adding loads of redundant text to bulk it up and make it harder to read without actually providing me with any decent information. I don't need to know everything your site does in a single sentence, I just need to know the basics and the first sentence that you got from Facebook does that perfectly.
10)
Security Issues
Veepiz strongly believes in originality and privacy. This is the sole reason your information is only viewable by your friends unlike other social networking sites.
Security Issues is a bad term to start with. Are you telling me you have security issues? That's what I thought when I first saw that heading.
Taking your privacy seriously would be a bit more fitting.
11)
This is the sole reason your information is only viewable by your friends unlike other social networking sites.
I would seriously think about changing this whole idea. A massive part of the meeting new friends, getting found through search engines and catching people's attention is from stumbling across a profile and reading it. Your site will never get any of that if the user is forced to keep their profile private. I know people who want to share their profile with anyone that wants to read it, that's why they have them. Give the user the option of showing or hiding their profile and remove that text from the homepage.
12)
Popular Walls - To me, this section goes against your privacy comment. You give me full privacy by hiding my profile but then show a link to it on the home page to strangers? If there is no way to view their profile without being their friend, why do I need to know who has the most popular profile?
13)
Latest African News - Right now I see 10 news articles on your home page which is far too many. Why not have 4 articles? Do you expect many people to come to your networking site so they can read the African news on your homepage? It just seems to be there to bulk up the content, again for no reason.
14) I would personally do away totally with your
latest members section because it can work against you. If your site gets busy, you will have to cache the database queries rather than hitting the database each time. In this situation your latest members would be showing out of date information and on the other hand, if your site is no busy then do you really want me knowing that your last new visitor was 6 weeks ago?
15) The subject doesn't appeal to me but as
audiopro said, even if it did there is nothing of interest on your home page to pull me to register. Why not tell me why I should use your site? Maybe my friends are using it? Maybe I could import my friends list easily?
16) I agree with
johnwm about the registration form. There is nothing wrong with asking for that information but don't do it on the homepage. Ask me for the very minimum information you actually need to create the account, then after you have me registered you can ask for more information.
Overall, I just think the home page looks like you've tried to add too much information without sitting down and thinking "What information
needs to be there?". Your home page is valuable real estate and you need to use the space wisely.
Im starting to see, comments on this forum stay on the surface.
The surface is all your visitors will see and the comments by the above posters are reflecting exactly that. You said you are getting a lot of bounce visitors so the above posters have responded based on their initial reactions to your home page.
Forget adding anything else to your site, you need to get the visitors into signups and the way to do that is to use your home page to sell registration to them. If I don't see the benefit of registering, I am never going to get to use any fancy addons you built into the members area.
Hope this helps,
Wullie
The pessimist complains about the wind. The optimist expects it to change. The leader adjusts the sails. - John Maxwell