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Hello
Site design looks clean and unfussy, but:
1) Spelling mistake - "Personnal Hosting"
2) Some XHTML tags not terminated properly.
3) Image tags don't have ALT attributes.
4) The button bar doesn't appear on page load - you need to move the mouse over the area to display the buttons.
5) "More Infos" buttons - doesn't make sense. "More Info." or "More Information" would be more grammatically correct.
To check items 2 and 3 more effectively, run it through and HTML Validator (see
John
Site design looks clean and unfussy, but:
1) Spelling mistake - "Personnal Hosting"
2) Some XHTML tags not terminated properly.
3) Image tags don't have ALT attributes.
4) The button bar doesn't appear on page load - you need to move the mouse over the area to display the buttons.
5) "More Infos" buttons - doesn't make sense. "More Info." or "More Information" would be more grammatically correct.
To check items 2 and 3 more effectively, run it through and HTML Validator (see
John
Referring to item 1, Availability is mispelled also in "Check for Availability"
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01000111 01101111 01110100 00100000 01000011 01101111 01100110 01100110 01100101 01100101 00111111
The never-completed website:
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01000111 01101111 01110100 00100000 01000011 01101111 01100110 01100110 01100101 01100101 00111111
The never-completed website:
On IE5.5 the [Login] button wraps round onto a following line - could it be you need to use the IE "Box model hack"?
More peculiar grammar:
"Reliable, fast and secure web and mail hosting for business located in North-America."
Surely ...for businesses located in North America (or do you mean that's where your business is located?)
"Starting at 6.99$", not $6.99 ?
"Our primary goal is to provide business class hosting service"
Not to provide a business class service?
On the hosting page
"If you are looking for a free hosting, you may check this special offert..."
Offert? and how do I check it anyway?
In the blurb at the top of the page it says "Our systems are designed [...] for 99.9% uptime". In the "System Specifications & Network" section at the bottom of the page it talks about a "99.8% Uptime Guarantee" - that reliability's slipped 0.1% already! In any case, what does this "guarantee" mean? If a site hosted with you goes down for more than 8¼ hours a year (or 17½ if we're at 99.8%) do I get my money back? Couldn't find any terms & conditions on the site to clarify.
On the "Corporate" page (which would more conventionally be called an "About" or "About Us" page, btw) you say "ABusinessHosting is a succesfull Hosting company located in Usa and Canada". That should be "successful", and are you really located in two countries at once? Not just Toronto?
On the "Reseller" page, spelling mistakes too numerous to mention (run your site though a spell check!). The last paragraph "We host your website for FREE if you can send us at least 100unique site a day. Plus, you get a 40$ for each sales you traffic generate". This is gibberish. I get a free site if I send you 100 sites a day? Gee! "google.com", "yahoo.com", "tek-tips.com", that's three. I'll think up another 97 and send them to you - do I get my free site? Do they have to be a different 100 each day? What if I only send you 99 one day - what do I pay?
General stylistic point: Your body text is very small, and can't be re-sized in Internet Explorer. Clue: Managers for businesses are often older persons with less than perfect eyesight..
Oh, and Happy New Year
-- Chris Hunt
More peculiar grammar:
"Reliable, fast and secure web and mail hosting for business located in North-America."
Surely ...for businesses located in North America (or do you mean that's where your business is located?)
"Starting at 6.99$", not $6.99 ?
"Our primary goal is to provide business class hosting service"
Not to provide a business class service?
On the hosting page
"If you are looking for a free hosting, you may check this special offert..."
Offert? and how do I check it anyway?
In the blurb at the top of the page it says "Our systems are designed [...] for 99.9% uptime". In the "System Specifications & Network" section at the bottom of the page it talks about a "99.8% Uptime Guarantee" - that reliability's slipped 0.1% already! In any case, what does this "guarantee" mean? If a site hosted with you goes down for more than 8¼ hours a year (or 17½ if we're at 99.8%) do I get my money back? Couldn't find any terms & conditions on the site to clarify.
On the "Corporate" page (which would more conventionally be called an "About" or "About Us" page, btw) you say "ABusinessHosting is a succesfull Hosting company located in Usa and Canada". That should be "successful", and are you really located in two countries at once? Not just Toronto?
On the "Reseller" page, spelling mistakes too numerous to mention (run your site though a spell check!). The last paragraph "We host your website for FREE if you can send us at least 100unique site a day. Plus, you get a 40$ for each sales you traffic generate". This is gibberish. I get a free site if I send you 100 sites a day? Gee! "google.com", "yahoo.com", "tek-tips.com", that's three. I'll think up another 97 and send them to you - do I get my free site? Do they have to be a different 100 each day? What if I only send you 99 one day - what do I pay?
General stylistic point: Your body text is very small, and can't be re-sized in Internet Explorer. Clue: Managers for businesses are often older persons with less than perfect eyesight..
Oh, and Happy New Year
-- Chris Hunt
I like the site also
think you really need to tear it up word by word and get those grammatical errors though. can weigh heavily on sales
here's one I notived I dont' think was pointed out also
Medium Business listing on the hosting.php page
no dollar sign on that column
Yearly
$120.00 $180.00 240.00 $360.00
_____________________________________________________________________
Hakuna matata!!
think you really need to tear it up word by word and get those grammatical errors though. can weigh heavily on sales
here's one I notived I dont' think was pointed out also
Medium Business listing on the hosting.php page
no dollar sign on that column
Yearly
$120.00 $180.00 240.00 $360.00
_____________________________________________________________________
Hakuna matata!!
Hi mate,
I commented in your other thread then Chris pointed me to this one.
Some things I noticed:
1 GB Extra Bandwidth $5
Dedicated IP Address $15/year
If the IP is $15/year, what is the Bandwidth? year/month/day?
Detailed Web Stats Statistics
Eh?
Modperl For Apache
There is no such thing as Modperl, surely you mean mod_perl?
The Webmasters link doesnt go anywhere.
Ok, this is by far the best one yet. On your order page, why exactly when I enter does it show me a confirmation of:
Register - 19.95?
Other restrictions may apply
And these can be found where?
Windows 2003 .NET - add licence fee 600$
$600?? Seriously? I can issue licenses for about $20, you need to find a better supplier. Also, check the spelling.
Your login to Plesk shows a cert issued by Plesk, why not buy one or issue your own?
nowayisthistaken....com is free! Register this domain now!
So by trading stadards, you are giving this to me free, without charge? Surely that should say available? Also, you need validation, the .... is what I actually typed in.
Hope this helps
Wullie
The pessimist complains about the wind. The optimist expects it to change. The leader adjusts the sails. - John Maxwell
I commented in your other thread then Chris pointed me to this one.
Some things I noticed:
1 GB Extra Bandwidth $5
Dedicated IP Address $15/year
If the IP is $15/year, what is the Bandwidth? year/month/day?
Detailed Web Stats Statistics
Eh?
Modperl For Apache
There is no such thing as Modperl, surely you mean mod_perl?
The Webmasters link doesnt go anywhere.
Ok, this is by far the best one yet. On your order page, why exactly when I enter does it show me a confirmation of:
Register - 19.95?
Other restrictions may apply
And these can be found where?
Windows 2003 .NET - add licence fee 600$
$600?? Seriously? I can issue licenses for about $20, you need to find a better supplier. Also, check the spelling.
Your login to Plesk shows a cert issued by Plesk, why not buy one or issue your own?
nowayisthistaken....com is free! Register this domain now!
So by trading stadards, you are giving this to me free, without charge? Surely that should say available? Also, you need validation, the .... is what I actually typed in.
Hope this helps
Wullie
The pessimist complains about the wind. The optimist expects it to change. The leader adjusts the sails. - John Maxwell
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